Revised the pitch to 62 words by:

- Removed "computer vision" (technical jargon → "via AI")
- Cut "adapting instantly" (not essential at pre-seed)
- Changed "any grocer" to "any store" (-1 syllable)
- Replaced capability language with outcome language ("cutting waste and saving money")
- Streamlined "shipping overhead" to "shipping costs"
- Tightened call-to-action to "pre-seed round"

All five required elements remain intact with stronger word economy and investor focus.